Two Poems, with Figurative Language

Says Mr. Dennis Siluk, when asked to review his poetry somewhat, for he hesitates all the time when I ask him to so; I can tell you. Anyhow, he said to me (responding more on poem #728, "Derivative Echoes"): "Figurative language, meaning words used to refer to something that you don't really mean, is used here to make noises, as are metaphors sometimes. Probably the reason I used figurative language imagery here was to tie the ideas and feelings my poem [s] expresses [ness] to the physical world in which I want it to exist." He lost me somewhere along the line, but it sounded good when I read the poems. Rosa Penaloza.

The Bear-men of Qolqepunku
(or: the magical ice of Peru)

(Foreshadow)

High up in the Andes of Peru
The Ukukus wander on

Glacier, frost and snow

Dressed in furry clocks and masks
They trek to find the mountains ice

Of sacred healing powers

The Bear-men, they are called:
In the old language of the Quechua;

Guardians of the ice

They cut the ice in solid blocks
Carried on backs, down mountain paths,

To family, friends, and livestock

Ah! Sixteen-thousand feet high, comes
A pilgrimage Qoyllur Rit i' ?

Year, after year, after year.

The Bear-men-, silently watch
Their glacier, slowly disappear

As if in thin air!...

They've now decide to leave the ice
The magical ice of Peru, in place

As warming temperatures rise?

This is helping the Ice Cap
Evaporate, in the 21st Century-

Perhaps this is a whisper?

"Is this the world's end?"

#731 6/17/05

Derivative Echoes

I would show you love in a handful of clouds-

Could I find the clouds, and find the love;
And is it love one is really looking for?

Fallen angels had love from heaven,
And chose lust in place, on earth?!

In hell one loves lust and thus, would be

Unhappy in Heaven I imagine?;
Ah! Maybe allusions is the strand we're

Looking for?? We're living for?
We live in the age of imagined howling

?with aches and pains in the mind

Fear of death-nymphs (well dressed)
Schoolmasters serving children a blotted

Light; perfect pitch, more questions than
Answer; disrupting the harmonic balance!...

#728 6/2005

Poet Dennis Siluk
http://dennissiluk.tripod.com

Experience the Emotions of a Korean Man Through His Poetry -- New ...
MarketWatch - Sep 5, 2008
Currently, the poet resides in Los Angeles, writing and translating poetry and stories. To request a complimentary paperback review copy, ...

Poetry book of the week: The Lost Leader by Mick Imlah
Independent, UK - 2 hours ago
... book's outstanding poems, includes the couplet "you'd fixed it/ For the powers-that-be up there to pay me/ To do a poetry reading with Kathleen Jamie". ...

Sibal turns to poetry to take a dig at Left
Expressindia.com, India - Sep 5, 2008
Thiruvananthapuram, September 5: Union Minister Kapil Sibal on Friday turned to poetry to take a dig at Left parties, the UPA government’s erstwhile ...

Russian poetry, put in perspective
The Age, Australia - Sep 5, 2008
Perhaps Anna Akhmatova did come among us last weekend, through the medium of other writers reading her poetry, in both Russian and English. ...

AS Maulucci: Visionary poetry looks beyond the everyday to reveal ...
Norwich Bulletin, CT - 20 hours ago
Visionary poetry looks far beyond the normal range of a human life. It takes hold of the imagination with a kind of hypnotic language that induces a mental ...

The week in books Danger, poetry! Puffs from the grave; new blood ...
guardian.co.uk, UK - Sep 5, 2008
... We Need to Talk about Kevin and Browning's poetry, due to the regrettable presence of "My Last Duchess", withdrawn from school libraries. ...

Poetry allows me to express myself: Kapil Sibal
Economic Times, India - Sep 5, 2008
But the evening was not all about poetry. Sibal was forced to talk about politics. "We (politicians) too are sensitive. We too have feelings like any other ...

Hindu
Remembering Nissim Ezekiel
Hindu, India - 6 hours ago
But somehow, even after the other faculties degenerated, sensitivity to poetry remained unimpaired. Santan recounts how they visited Nissim at the nursing ...
Lines in memoriam Hindu
all 2 news articles

Toilet door poetry project launched
The Advertiser, UK - 18 hours ago
The project, called the Poetry Treatment, was due to be launched yesterday . On display at the launch, were some of the poems and the smart, ...
Of poems and prisons Norfolk Eastern Daily Press
The herbal hazards that could threaten the unborn child Daily Mail
all 4 news articles

Exhibit honors poet Jeffers
The Salinas Californian, CA - 13 hours ago
This initiative, in partnership with the Poetry Foundation, celebrates the nation's historic poetry sites. Both Carmel poet Robinson Jeffers and Salinas ...
Businesswomen to host panel on opportunities Monterey County Herald
all 2 news articles

Wind Chimes and more...

Windchimes for great gifts!

Five Poems from Home [And a view on the planet vs. the poet]